twilight tiger

Great poem :) I have a little bit of a review for you though. I was really involved in the poem up until this part: "And now you shout. I ...

I really love the vocabulary you use in this. EX: "doth" My favorite phrase in your poem..."writ in blood." I didn't think it was possible to cut a word like ...

Your writing is beautiful. Seeing as how this is my first work of yours that I'm reading, I am stunned...but in a good way! I like this poem very much ...

good show! :D is that the end? it sounds like it. i found some grammatical errors in there, all spelling. It's too much to write it out. and i have ...

“No,” he rubbed his forehead. “Please, Stella. You’re the best think I’ve ever had…” *** this was really good. i only found one thing, and it was the word in ...

" C arolyn, a woman of sweet smile Embroidered upon an angelic face Whose charms can echo even a mile With a warm and tender embrace. A lways caring and ...

love it! love it! love it! :D thats all i have to say. It sounded really good, it flowed real nicely, and overall, i just loved it =P I liked ...

I really liked this. It was so sweet and everything at the beginning. With you two falling for each other based on hands. I liked the title too, but I ...

this was written really well! :D I rather enjoyed reading it, it had a nice pattern and flow to it. The short two first lines, followed by the last a ...

I liked this poem. the chorus sounding part, it made it interesting to find. Made it seem like a song. Was that how it was meant? if so, it was ...

This is written really well. I like the rhythm, and the flow. Even though you went off for a while without really rhyming the words, it still went. And that, ...

"the one who controls when I take a piss" that made me laugh. =D i liked that poem. the sadness and emotion in it. The style and organization. All were ...

It was so cute and emotional ^^ When I first read about a week ago, I wasn't sure what it was about. I don't know why, but I thought it ...

great poem. i liked how everything related to the title and it was all metaphors. For, what is life without metaphors? right? =P I liked the way you rhymed it ...

I liked the way she couldn't forget about Whisper, then bam! He appears in the same club as her. Really nice twist. I also like the fact that many supernatural ...